Need advice on my MBA application essays

[newinvestor]

Dear friends
I'm writing essays for my MBA applications. The writing is much more difficult than I expected. I'm sincerely inviting friends with top-20 MBA degrees to review my essays (less than 2000 words in total) and give your opinions. In return, I can buy you a nice dinner.

Please kindly leave your contact or drop me a line at [email protected]

Thank you

[aargon]

I mean like WTF? if you cant write a descent application, I dont like your chances with the MBA.

[JR8]

I would have thought that someone who had gone through the rigors of a good MBA might be disinclined from helping you make your application process easier.

I can understand that you clearly want to get on the course, and the application process might rattle your nerves, but you're certainly not going to get spoon-fed the learning on a good MBA course. There are surely books and websites out there that discuss writing MBA application essays. If you are requesting tailored assistance then I'd consider that cheating, and a suggestion that you are not the right material for the course.