Goodness gracious. What in God's name is wrong with you?! This is a bleeding forum for God's sake not an English O' Level paper.Funky_Punk wrote:1) I was about to tell you that i just my email.
-You did what to your email? Adjusted your email? What were you trying to say?
2) no no.... until now still havent receive their
email from them yet.
-If you use "still", you don't use "yet", at least not in the same sentence and vice versa.
If you use "their", you don't use "them", at least not in the same sentence and vice versa.
3) how lucky you are and
how i envious you?
-It is "envy", not "envious"
4)how i also wish that i can
also get to receive email from CX soon.
-You receive emails, not get to receive emails.
5)maybe the more high i hold, the less chances
i will get it.
-Are you suggesting that you are trying to put something high up on a shelf to prevent yourself from reaching it easily in future? Probably you are on a diet and you are trying to keep a jar of cookies away from sight? Is that what you were trying to say?
6)do you think so? sob sob.... i even
try to send in one more time again to CX.
-When you say "one more time", it already means "again".
7)scare that maybe they didnt receive it or reach them.
can really feel that you are really happy.
imagine that if i will you also. receive their email from
CX, i would also be jumping for joy.
-Fragment considered revising
Do us all a nice favour, take your corrective comments some where else. We don't appreciate it at all. Like DinG DonG BeLL said, that was really rude. So maybe, brush up on your manners before you start correcting anyone's language abilities.
