My appeal letter for renew student pass reject

[Alicexxx]

Im study in Singapore about 2 years
I study at Diploma.i was dont come school more time so my attendent is too low (about 50%) and i fail 2 lesson.I was write appeal letter to ICA but they rejected me one time. So i had behalf to write appeal .who can help me how i can write the second time what reason to convince ICA can accpect my letter ? Can i need show them to bank guarantee that can afford to pay and live in singapore without having to do to go work?
Thank for help me ! Plsss

[sundaymorningstaple]

How on earth is it possible to be here strictly on a student visa and miss 50% of the courses? Where you soliciting at night and therefore overslept at some john's house so therefore missed your classes? Appeal? You are lucky they didn't just throw you out of the country. I doubt there is anything you could possibly say in a "2nd" appeal that will mollify any ICA official. In fact, there is no way you can convince me that you weren't working here illegally and your course(s) was just as ruse to keep you in the country with a legal residency visa. I think ICA was right in their rejection in the first instance.

[Alicexxx]

How on earth is it possible to be here strictly on a student visa and miss 50% of the courses? Where you soliciting at night and therefore overslept at some john's house so therefore missed your classes? Appeal? You are lucky they didn't just throw you out of the country. I doubt there is anything you could possibly say in a "2nd" appeal that will mollify any ICA official. In fact, there is no way you can convince me that you weren't working here illegally and your course(s) was just as ruse to keep you in the country with a legal residency visa. I think ICA was right in their rejection in the first instance.

i know my mistake inexcusable.the truth i have insommia so i cannot sleep at night and then i have a class morning but i cannot wake up. My rethink still stupid I can not think I'm going to mess like this.i really idiot. but If i can demonstrate financial for Ica that i have money to study here maybe they will give me a chance ? i really dont working in here

[sundaymorningstaple]

I don't see your insommia changing so why should they give you another Student Visa? You would be better off going home and getting some sleep. If ICA started letting people, who only had money in the bank, stay here then there would be 20 million souls stuffed on the little red dot. So I think you will find that ICA's answer will still be no.

[Alicexxx]

I don't see your insommia changing so why should they give you another Student Visa? You would be better off going home and getting some sleep. If ICA started letting people, who only had money in the bank, stay here then there would be 20 million souls stuffed on the little red dot. So I think you will find that ICA's answer will still be no.

That's just my past. Now I think I really need to change.who also had mistakes and no one wants that to happen both.thank you for educate me!

[midlet2013]

you not only wasted your time not attending school, you did not improve your English. you cannot write one sentence correctly. i guess you are lucky that your parents could afford to send you to Singapore.

however, your insincere approach to studies tells ICA that you will be like this in future too, and such people are not needed in singapore.

however, if your appeal fails, you may find a new, and perhaps a better path in life. so, be positive. something good may come out of this and someday in the future, you may realize that getting kicked out was the best thing that happened to you.

[x9200]

you not only wasted your time not attending school, you did not improve your English. you cannot write one sentence correctly. i guess you are lucky that your parents could afford to send you to Singapore.

however, your insincere approach to studies tells ICA that you will be like this in future too, and such people are not needed in singapore.

however, if your appeal fails, you may find a new, and perhaps a better path in life. so, be positive. something good may come out of this and someday in the future, you may realize that getting kicked out was the best thing that happened to you.

What is sort of funny to read in a post with not a single correct sentence neither.
Having said that, I generally agree with you. OP, your problem is not ICA. If you really have a medical condition then go and see a doctor, otherwise, go and do something with your life.

[sundaymorningstaple]

He can end a sentence properly but just cannot start one properly.

[midlet2013]

Stop being finicky and ignore my starting sentences without capitals. Seriously, in the day and age of sms, whatsapp and twitter, semantics matter more than the correctness. But, the OP's english was brutal. I am surprised how no one mentioned it. Perhaps, you guys do that only to Indian PR applicants

But then, I do not mind. I want you guys to mock me and feel good about your grammar and sentence creation.

you not only wasted your time not attending school, you did not improve your English. you cannot write one sentence correctly. i guess you are lucky that your parents could afford to send you to Singapore.

however, your insincere approach to studies tells ICA that you will be like this in future too, and such people are not needed in singapore.

however, if your appeal fails, you may find a new, and perhaps a better path in life. so, be positive. something good may come out of this and someday in the future, you may realize that getting kicked out was the best thing that happened to you.

What is sort of funny to read in a post with not a single correct sentence neither.
Having said that, I generally agree with you. OP, your problem is not ICA. If you really have a medical condition then go and see a doctor, otherwise, go and do something with your life.

[sundaymorningstaple]

What the heck did you expect? When you chide another poster about their dirty back porch, you need to ensure you own back porch is swept first.

[midlet2013]

I expected exactly what you did old man. But, then I am glad I made you feel good about how you write

What did you guys expect when you pointed out the irony in my post. Admiration ??

What the heck did you expect? When you chide another poster about their dirty back porch, you need to ensure you own back porch is swept first.

[JR8]

Meanwhile, back to the question.
The issue Alicexxx is, you're here as a student, but not really studying, so ICA are not taking you seriously. So ICA will be wondering what you're really doing, and why they should allow you to stay here.

[x9200]

I expected exactly what you did old man. But, then I am glad I made you feel good about how you write

What did you guys expect when you pointed out the irony in my post. Admiration ??

What the heck did you expect? When you chide another poster about their dirty back porch, you need to ensure you own back porch is swept first.

Thank you for your effort to improve your written English. Personally, I hope the second, more important part will also improve. It may take some time but I believe there is a good chance for it.

[ecureilx]

Meanwhile, back to the question.
The issue Alicexxx is, you're here as a student, but not really studying, so ICA are not taking you seriously. So ICA will be wondering what you're really doing, and why they should allow you to stay here.

Please read again

She has chronic insomnia

[sundaymorningstaple]

So, are you implying that they should let her stay here just because she has money in the bank? And, as long as she has insomnia, it's okay, they should make exceptions for her? Seriously?